培力英語能力檢定測驗組織
發布日期 : 2024-04-19|瀏覽人次 : 59|資料來源 : 培力英語能力檢定測驗
- 論述連貫性薄弱：段落內缺乏主題句和連接詞，使論點難以理解，例如：
原句：I found few students use the free learning resources. The free learning resources are great. I benefited a lot. I think we should hold a game.
修改：The free learning resources are great, and I have benefited a lot from them. However, I found few students use them. That's why I think we should hold a game to get their attention. - 組織及連貫性不佳：缺乏清晰組織內容，影響整體理解，例如：
原句：Summarize the two surveys of figure 1 and figure 2, we can see…
修改：To summarize, in figure 1, we can see… As for figure 2, it shows…