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Date : 2024-04-26|Visitors : 184|Source : BEST Test of English Proficiency
- 論述連貫性薄弱:段落內缺乏主題句和連接詞,使論點難以理解,例如:
原句:I found few students use the free learning resources. The free learning resources are great. I benefited a lot. I think we should hold a game.
修改:The free learning resources are great, and I have benefited a lot from them. However, I found few students use them. That's why I think we should hold a game to get their attention. - 組織及連貫性不佳:缺乏清晰組織內容,影響整體理解,例如:
原句:Summarize the two surveys of figure 1 and figure 2, we can see…
修改:To summarize, in figure 1, we can see… As for figure 2, it shows…