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第二部分：表達意見
Part II: Expressing Opinions


請依據下列指示寫一篇約80字的短文，建議作答時間15分鐘。
Read the following prompt and write a short text using approximately 80 words. You should spend about 15 minutes on this task.

You are Lynn Pan. Your university has recently opened a new food court on campus. It includes a vegetarian restaurant, two tea shops, and a well-known fast food restaurant. You decided to express your opinion on this new addition to campus.

In your email, you should

1. explain whether you think this is a good change;
2. make at least one suggestion about how the food service can be improved on your campus.

以下範文獲得B2+，範文末附上具體賞析（請見標號1-2）；另，也提供調整建議，以利全篇文章更為流暢（請見標號3）。​

Dear Administrator,​
My name is Lynn Pan, and I'm a student at KMU. I'm excited about the new food court and thrilled that it includes two tea shops since I love having beverages during class. ➌However, there' s still some suggestions I would like to propose. First of all, I hope there can be more options. Since I' m not a vegetarian, there will be only one choice if I want to dine in this food court. Also, ➊fast food is of course delicious, but not healthy. Therefore, it would be better if there could be more than one restaurant for us to choose from. Lastly, if possible, I would like to have a cup of coffee or a comfortable and relaxing area to hang out between classes; therefore, it would be awesome if the food court can also include a café.​
➋Thank you for your time and attention.​
Sincerely,​
Lynn Pan​​

賞析：
本作品符合題目兩點要求，組織分明、表達通順並有適當證據支持論點。語法及搭配詞雖偶有錯誤，但無礙表達。​

• 充分敘述觀點，並提供合理佐證。
  ➊ [F]ast food is of course delicious, but not healthy. Therefore, it would be better if there could be more than one restaurant for us to choose from.
• 書信格式正確，並以適當結語收尾。
  ➋ Thank you for your time and attention.

建議：
然而，為讓本作品表達更為流暢、語意更為連貫，文字可再稍作調整，以下舉例說明：​

• 主詞與搭配動詞須一致。
  ➌ ​However, there are still some suggestions I would like to propose.